Sorry opening
Hey guys, sorry I'm late. Let's get straight into this assignment. My task is to create a creative story opening.
"That doesn't look right! Could it really be?" As what seemed to be night grew darker, his eyesight began betraying him. Has his worst fear come alive?
Tell me what you think and if it makes you interested to know more 🙂.
Great opening! It immediately builds suspense and makes me want to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story opening! It’s mysterious and immediately grabs the reader’s attention. The way you describe the darkness and the character’s fear makes me curious to find out what happens next. I’m definitely interested to keep reading and discover what his worst fear might be. Great job creating suspense!
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