Persuasive Piece
Good night Growing Writers, I hope you had a wonderful weekend. This Sunday evening I would love to share with you a piece I wrote in class about myself .
Please Let Me Be Me Daddy
Bramble’s Crescent,
Tabernacle Village,
St. Kitts.
Wednesday 22nd October 2025
Dear Daddy,
Have
you ever wondered what it feels like to see yourself and love what you see?
That is how I feel when I wear my natural curls. I know you have suggested
straightening my hair because you think it would be easier. Daddy, I truly
respect that you are trying to help. However, I am asking you to please listen
to my heart; my curls are not a problem to fix. They are part of who I am, and
I need you to let me keep them.
Straightening
my hair might seem like a small change, but it comes with real consequences.
The heat used in the process can seriously damage my hair, making it weak, dry,
and even causing it to fall out. I have worked hard to keep my curls healthy. I
do not want to ruin them just to chase an idea of neat that does not include
the beauty of natural Black hair.
Next,
maintaining straightened hair is not easy; it actually takes more work in the
long run. It requires constant heat, frequent styling, and expensive products
to keep it looking smooth. My natural curls, on the other hand, are easier to
manage once I care for them properly. They show my personality and allow me to
express myself freely without pretending to be someone I am not.
Daddy,
I know you only want the best for me, and I appreciate your concern. I just want
you to see that what’s best for me is embracing who I truly am, curls and all.
When I wear my hair naturally, I feel proud, confident, and beautiful. Please
let me continue to wear my curls the way they are, because they are part of my
identity and heritage.
Your daughter,
Tiana


A splendid use of persuasion! Cant wait to see more!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your piece, Tiana! I love how clearly and respectfully you expressed your feelings about your natural curls. Your letter shows confidence, self-awareness, and a strong sense of identity. I also liked how you explained the practical reasons for embracing your natural hair while keeping the tone loving and persuasive. Your writing is heartfelt and inspiring. Beautifully done!
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