Expository Writing
Hey guys, it's me again! I am going to share my short expository piece I wrote in class, as a third-grade students. Let me know what you think!
‘My
favorite Plant’
Plants play an important role in
our lives. They are all around us. Some plants grow fruits, and others grow
vegetables. A pumpkin is a fruit that grows on a vine. Pumpkins come in many
different shapes, sizes, and colors. They can be used in many ways, such as
making pies, soups, salads, decorations, and juice. Pumpkins are a healthy and
interesting plant.
Hey there !! I really enjoyed reading your expository piece about pumpkins.Pumpkins are such a big part of Halloween, so your topic really matches the season! You did a great job explaining why plants are important and gave clear details about pumpkins especially how they come in different shapes, sizes, and colors. I like how you listed all the ways pumpkins can be used, too! Your writing is clear, informative, and shows great organization. Keep up the awesome work!
ReplyDeleteYour description causes me to think of making a pumpkin pie for dinner this afternoon.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading about pumpkins! I like how you explained the different uses and the variety of shapes and colors. It makes me appreciate how useful and interesting plants can be.
This was a very good read! I love pumpkins too.
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